The Fruit Battle

The orange one spoke first, “ I am a orange but I am still tasty, better than apples because apples are disgusting,” then apple spoke angrily back,” That’s not true because you don’t have a crunch sound when you get eaten like me,” They kept annoying each other! They got tired and bored inside their freezing fridge. They were so tired of talking that even apple started to sleep. But orange never gave up. He began rolling around the fridge and kept breathing heavily. Orange got so tired that he fell down all the way to the floor! “HELP!” he screamed, but apple did not answer…………..

3 thoughts on “The Fruit Battle”

  1. Well done Matthew, I really enjoyed the way you incorporated the prompt into your story. The use of adjectives (crunch, freezing) etc really enhances the story. Keep writing

    Tomas (team 100wc)

  2. Well written piece Matthew. The story and use of adjectives (describing words) kept the reader interested throughout.
    KEEP Writing
    Tomas (team 100wc)

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